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New story here .

Well, it's only been four months, but here is the Penultimate Chapter.   Chapter 50 Preparations and Concerns

Well, here it is, the final chapter.  Goodbye Chew Toy.  Thank you to all who have read, reviewed, and commented.  It's been a labor of love:   Chapter 52 Bon Voyage     There are two posters h

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I love the story.  I especially like how you brought Wil Wheaton's involvement.  You are hitting some really good points, things that I suspected all along.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

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I liked this very much. Please keep it up. I always felt there was a lot going on that just didn't get covered. There was the four months between the drunken booty call and Penny learning about the Shamy. She seemed totally comfortable at that point. 

 

Further, it seemed like such a stupid reason for her to dump Leonard, and to do it in public at the urging of basically a total stranger. You're tying things together nicely.

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Hey Tensor, I just read chapter 3.  I really liked it especially the revelation of Penny's feelings about science, comic books etc...  this really tying to the L/P story together nicely.How many chapters do you plan to write and how long until chapter 4? 

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After reading the part about Wil Wheaton again, and then remembering that he was the one who posted the video of Howard's Bachelor party on the internet, I think that there needs to be an episode where Sheldon and Leonard do get him back.  His character in the show has been a real jerk.

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After reading the part about Wil Wheaton again, and then remembering that he was the one who posted the video of Howard's Bachelor party on the internet, I think that there needs to be an episode where Sheldon and Leonard do get him back.  His character in the show has been a real jerk.

Sorry, I think that is reserved for Penny, he deserves to be on the receiving end of her Nebraskan man hands.

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Sorry, I think that is reserved for Penny, he deserves to be on the receiving end of her Nebraskan man hands.

That would be funny to watch.  What do you think does? Does she take her baseball bat to him or just a swift kick in his special place?

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That would be funny to watch.  What do you think does? Does she take her baseball bat to him or just a swift kick in his special place?

Thump in the guts followed by a knee to his special place as he doubles over, just be be sure, hedoes deserve it. Don't forget he also was involved in upsetting Amy, her bestie.

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After reading the part about Wil Wheaton again, and then remembering that he was the one who posted the video of Howard's Bachelor party on the internet, I think that there needs to be an episode where Sheldon and Leonard do get him back. His character in the show has been a real jerk.

Being a jerk that's the part he supposed to play though!

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Chapter 3 was very well done. It came across quite intimate and touching.   Very well done!

Thank you. I was getting ready to reply to your review on FF, when I saw this. I almost replied to both. LOL. Again, thank you.

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I enjoyed chapter 4.  I thought the part about naming the toy to be pretty funny.  This also ties up a lot of questions from season 4 and confirms what I have always suspected about Penny, and that is that she has had some very deep feelings for Leonard for quite sometime. 

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