Jonny Posted July 4, 2017 Posted July 4, 2017 Started a new fanfic, very early stages (no sure where I will go with it). Much smaller chapters in terms of words I am planning for this (around 1,000 words each). Basically the premise is that Amy is due back soon and Sheldon has an idea to mark her return. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12558470/1/The-Dual-Celebration-Opportunity Again I'm trying to learn on the go and I am British so some of the word usage or how conversations are phrased may be a bit different, just something to keep in mind. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
spidergirl Posted July 4, 2017 Posted July 4, 2017 1 hour ago, Jonny said: Started a new fanfic, very early stages (no sure where I will go with it). Much smaller chapters in terms of words I am planning for this (around 1,000 words each). Basically the premise is that Amy is due back soon and Sheldon has an idea to mark her return. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12558470/1/The-Dual-Celebration-Opportunity Again I'm trying to learn on the go and I am British so some of the word usage or how conversations are phrased may be a bit different, just something to keep in mind. That's a great start! I love the way you write the dialogues in your fics and Sheldon’s idea for welcome Amy home was wonderful! Looking foward to reading more Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
joyceraye Posted July 6, 2017 Posted July 6, 2017 On 04/07/2017 at 10:24 PM, Jonny said: Started a new fanfic, very early stages (no sure where I will go with it). Much smaller chapters in terms of words I am planning for this (around 1,000 words each). Basically the premise is that Amy is due back soon and Sheldon has an idea to mark her return. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12558470/1/The-Dual-Celebration-Opportunity Again I'm trying to learn on the go and I am British so some of the word usage or how conversations are phrased may be a bit different, just something to keep in mind. Very enjoyable. Looking forward to the next chapter. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted July 6, 2017 Posted July 6, 2017 Just posted Chapter Two. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
joyceraye Posted July 6, 2017 Posted July 6, 2017 6 hours ago, Jonny said: Just posted Chapter Two. Thank you. It's good. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter ..... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted July 6, 2017 Posted July 6, 2017 Just now, joyceraye said: Thank you. It's good. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter ..... I'm glad you are enjoying it These two chapters have been fairly easy to write (I think the 1,000 or so word limit I am forcing myself for each chapter has helped) but I am expecting a much harder slog later on, not quite sure yet how I want it to go. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
spidergirl Posted July 7, 2017 Posted July 7, 2017 On 7/6/2017 at 10:58 AM, Jonny said: Just posted Chapter Two. Another great chapter! I don't want to spoiler who had not read it yet , as I will only say that I loved so much shamy talk and how adorably clueless our Sheldon still is about some stuff, lol! Looking foward to reading next one Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted July 7, 2017 Posted July 7, 2017 (edited) 1 hour ago, spidergirl said: Another great chapter! I don't want to spoiler who had not read it yet , as I will only say that I loved so much shamy talk and how adorably clueless our Sheldon still is about some stuff, lol! Looking foward to reading next one Once again thank you for the kind words I am glad you are enjoying it so far! Edited July 7, 2017 by Jonny Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted July 8, 2017 Posted July 8, 2017 Just put up Chapter Three, a chapter focusing on Amy Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted July 9, 2017 Posted July 9, 2017 Chapter Four is up with Sheldon revealing some of his plans. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
spidergirl Posted July 9, 2017 Posted July 9, 2017 On 7/8/2017 at 5:11 PM, Jonny said: Just put up Chapter Three, a chapter focusing on Amy Really enjoyable. It is clear from the way you write Amy that she is your favorite character from tbbt Going to read next chapter! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
spidergirl Posted July 9, 2017 Posted July 9, 2017 47 minutes ago, Jonny said: Chapter Four is up with Sheldon revealing some of his plans. Your story is really a very nice take on our favourite show as you really write well the interactions among the gang, whatever is the voice you choose for be the chapter pov from. Looking foward to reading next one Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted July 9, 2017 Posted July 9, 2017 2 minutes ago, spidergirl said: Your story is really a very nice take on our favourite show as you really write well the interactions among the gang, whatever is the voice you choose for be the chapter pov from. Looking foward to reading next one I'm glad you liked it and again and that you also enjoyed the previous chapter. I wasn't sure about the choice of meal, but I tried to come up with reasons to justify that. There are other reasons why Sheldon might want it in 4B which might become clear later. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
spidergirl Posted July 9, 2017 Posted July 9, 2017 3 minutes ago, Jonny said: I'm glad you liked it and again and that you also enjoyed the previous chapter. I wasn't sure about the choice of meal, but I tried to come up with reasons to justify that. There are other reasons why Sheldon might want it in 4B which might become clear later. My biggest curiosity right now about next chapter as I put my money as they might be great reasons! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
joyceraye Posted July 10, 2017 Posted July 10, 2017 I'm trying to think why 4B would be better.I've put my thinking cap on but haven't come up with anything yet......., Nope I got nothin' . Just have to wait. LOL. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted July 10, 2017 Posted July 10, 2017 11 hours ago, joyceraye said: I'm trying to think why 4B would be better.I've put my thinking cap on but haven't come up with anything yet......., Nope I got nothin' . Just have to wait. LOL. The idea I am thinking of might be a surprise, it wouldn't be a massive one but it might add further to some of Sheldon's thinking. Anyway I've just added Chapter 5. Probably another 3 or maybe 4 chapters to go I am thinking, the next Chapter will be more preparation and the day she is due back. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
spidergirl Posted July 10, 2017 Posted July 10, 2017 (edited) 5 hours ago, Jonny said: The idea I am thinking of might be a surprise, it wouldn't be a massive one but it might add further to some of Sheldon's thinking. Anyway I've just added Chapter 5. Probably another 3 or maybe 4 chapters to go I am thinking, the next Chapter will be more preparation and the day she is due back. The plot thickens.... why Amy needed to be distracted? *ponders* Really looking foward to reading what Sheldon had in mind for that special day! Edited July 10, 2017 by spidergirl Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted July 10, 2017 Posted July 10, 2017 (edited) 1 hour ago, spidergirl said: The plot thickens.... why Amy needed to be distracted? *ponders* Really looking foward to reading what Sheldon had in mind for that special day! Happy you are still enjoying it Edited July 10, 2017 by Jonny Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
spidergirl Posted July 10, 2017 Posted July 10, 2017 As I was reading most recent update, I thought how I miss shamy in 4 B. Glad you are writing this story as we will see shamy there soon. Thanks for doing this hiatus time seem shorter, @Jonny Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted July 10, 2017 Posted July 10, 2017 9 minutes ago, spidergirl said: As I was reading most recent update, I thought how I miss shamy in 4 B. Glad you are writing this story as we will see shamy there soon. Thanks for doing this hiatus time seem shorter, @Jonny I just hope I have enough ideas left to still keep it interesting until the end. I might have made the party itself a bigger deal than I had planned lol and now have to actually come up with something substantial on that front lol. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
joyceraye Posted July 11, 2017 Posted July 11, 2017 Amy will like the gesture and the thought that's been put into the celebration. She won't mind if there's not a vast crowd of people there. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted July 11, 2017 Posted July 11, 2017 (edited) Ok Chapter Six is up. Apologies for the size of it, couldn't stick to my under 2000 words limit for this one. Not entirely happy with this one truth be told, but anyway there should hopefully be a bit of a Shelnard bromance vibe in this one that was my intention anyway lol. Edited July 11, 2017 by Jonny Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
spidergirl Posted July 11, 2017 Posted July 11, 2017 (edited) 1 hour ago, Jonny said: Ok Chapter Six is up. Apologies for the size of it, couldn't stick to my under 2000 words limit for this one. Not entirely happy with this one truth be told, but anyway there should hopefully be a bit of a Shelnard bromance vibe in this one that was my intention anyway lol. Your mission was accomplished imo, as I have enjoyed very much shelnard scenes. Last scene made my night! <3 Looking foward to reading next chapter eargerly! Edited July 11, 2017 by spidergirl Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted July 12, 2017 Posted July 12, 2017 14 hours ago, spidergirl said: Your mission was accomplished imo, as I have enjoyed very much shelnard scenes. Last scene made my night! <3 Looking foward to reading next chapter eargerly! Thanks! I am thinking there will be 2 maybe 3 (final one might be shorter) more chapters. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
spidergirl Posted July 13, 2017 Posted July 13, 2017 20 hours ago, Jonny said: Thanks! I am thinking there will be 2 maybe 3 (final one might be shorter) more chapters. You are welcome! It has been a really nice take after s10 finale. Good job! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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